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Cake day: June 4th, 2025

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  • This article feels like it was cobbled together with AI because of confusion about the subject/object in terms of sentence structure, and use of pronouns.

    Marie-Thérèse mother had moved to the US after marrying her long-lost love - an American man named Billy whom she had met in the 1960s, when he was a soldier stationed in the Nato base of Saint-Nazaire, and she a secretary.

    Did Marie-Thérèse move to the US or did her mother? It sounds more like it should be, “The son’s mother had moved,” but the article never actually names the son, so it’s impossible to use pronouns, without referencing the proper noun first Then there is the use of “had moved” instead of just “moved.”

    But aside from that, FUCK ICE.